Blog Post #18: Place and Time Response

Sophie's

- Short Story/ Personal Narrative

-Dialogue was great and flowed throughout the paper

-Overall great story line and plot twist!

- Great vocabulary

- I think she just needs to add an exciting and engaging title

Kassandra's

-Short Story

-Needs a title

-Dialogue flowed smoothly throughout

- Paragraph structure is good and short stories have a great flow and are easily understandable

-I like the story choices, they really help me to relate and understand the paper